Monday, August 3, 2009

It all started on a dreary day...?

when the wind was blowing and the leaves were flying out of the dry. I saw my neighbors down the street talking about something that must of been of importance. My dog was running around like there was ants biting him and I saw a bird crap on my car. The wind was picking up and dirt was swiftly been relocated to an area that nobody knows about. Rain started falling when all of a sudden a big crash of thunder and lightning nearly scared me half to death. I couldn't believe that rain was falling on a day when no rain was even in the forecast. I was going to bar-b-que but since it was now raining it was no longer in my plans. I swifty walked across the yard stomping on poor innocent sunflowers that were in my path. Mud was starting to form in parts of my yard that I didn't venture into very often. My new boots were getting soaked and I couldn't believe my stupidity for almost ruining them. With that said, I have no questions. Just a very interesting short story for all of you guys.

It all started on a dreary day...?
weirdo...





edit: let me rephrase...weirdos...
Reply:Thanks for the story.
Reply:thanks....you should be published!
Reply:i agree with deble_2000, u shuld get published! very interesting story :)
Reply:I was going to say you asked and answered any dam question you might have had...Good story though:)
Reply:Thats what happens every time my in-laws are in town (just kidding) want more.
Reply:And all of this happens in how many seconds of time? :-)
Reply:u have a knack for writing, an ability to pull a reader into the plot with an eloquent brush. pursue ur career in writing. u'll flourish.
Reply:Nice story
Reply:Put it to music. Have it orchestrated.


Rose P.
Reply:this is the best short story i ever read in my life. Gay people write so well



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